So, yesterday I saw a post about a “square poem” often attributed to Lewis Carroll (although as to who the real author is seems ambiguous). A square poem is apparently one whose words you could read either in rows (horizontally) or in columns (vertically); the poem would read the same. Here’s Lewis Carroll’s square poem:
I often wondered when I cursed,
Often feared where I would be—
Wondered where she’d yield her love,
When I yield, so will she.
I would her will be pitied!
Cursed be love! She pitied me …
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Up until yesterday, I didn’t know what a square poem was, but the moment I learned of it, I wanted to give it a try! It’s like a “poem sudoku”, if you will, and since I like both poems and sudoku, of course I have to give it a shot, haha.
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Here’s my own square poem, If We Both Fall in Love:
If we both fall in love,
we will have no regrets thereof
Both have known loneliness, we avow
Fall, no loneliness shall stay now
In regrets, we stay no more
Love thereof—avow now, more sure.
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Below is a matrix to make it easier to read as a square poem:
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What do you think about making your own square poem? It’s a mind-boggling exercise, but what a way to get the creative juices flowing. 🙂
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This entry is part of my undertaking a 30-day challenge Matt Cutts talked about at TED2011. The premise is to “think about something you’ve always wanted to add to your life and try it for the next 30 days.” I am challenging myself to post one blog entry a day for 30 consecutive days.
Today is Day 8.
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I’m impressed. I also had not heard of a square poem, my mind is too round I think 😀
But very well written my friend, I’m impressed with its beauty ❤
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Thank you, Mark! Haha, I’m sure a “round” mind has its merits as well.
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I think it does 😀
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This is my first time hearing about a “square poem”. Thank you for bringing it to my attention!
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You’re very much welcome 🙂
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Thank you for sharing. It’s my first time learning about the square poem, too. I love the matrix you shared. It’s a good aid to this poetry style. Really interesting. 🙂
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My pleasure! Something that might help if you want to create a square poem, too — While working on this, I drew the lines of the matrix using a pen, and then jotted down words using pencil. That way, I could change words as often as I wanted to as I tried to find a combination that works.
Thank you for dropping by my page and for your kind comment! 🙂
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Great tip! Thanks for sharing. I love your blog and your writing. 🙂
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That means a lot to me. Thank you ❤
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you did a beautiful job – many tx for sharing 🙂
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Thank you! It was my pleasure. 🙂
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This looks like a fun creative exercise/challenge! Never heard of these.
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Yes, it’s really fun to do! I admit it can get quite frustrating towards the end, though, as it gets more difficult to match and make sense of the resulting lines, but it’s such a great exercise for creativity. 🙂
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Wow, this looks like a really fun challenge! I’ve got to give it a go 😃 Thanks for sharing this, love both poems too 😊
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Yay! Yes, it’s really fun to do! Tickles the creative bones. Thank you for reading, and for taking on the challenge, too! 😊
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I’m a composer also and used to write 12-tone music that uses matrices of notes, 12 across and 12 down. They dont always read the same across and down though…
Kinda feels like it might be similar somehow, nevertheless!
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Yeah, if you’re used to thinking in the form of matrices, then maybe it will feel quite familiar. Have fun making the poem! 🙂
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If you can write this, you can easily write a villanelle
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Oh, I haven’t tried that (and am not sure what a villanelle is? hehe).
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